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A face blistered with tears
An arm scarred from cuts
A heart shattered like glass.

A tear falls on blistered skin
As blood seeps from heartfelt wounds
As shattered love settles like dust
Blanketing solitary emotions.

Take my wounds
Take my scars
Bleeding sores
Of broken hearts
©2004-2009 ~SleepingDeadly
:iconsleepingdeadly:

Author's Comments

I wrote this after i had my heart broken for the 2nd time. It was one of those night when you just think "what is the point".

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:iconsloodo:
:wow: I liked that alot i love how you got me intrested towards the end. Nice one!
:iconkatflutterby:
OMG! This is so emotional and beautiful! I love the descriptive words. Like sloodo said it got me very VERY interested. A expressive short poem ...i really enjoyed this. :+fav:

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:heart: Empty another bottle, and let me tear you to pieces. This is me wishing you into the worste situation. I'm the kind of kid that can;t let anything go, but you wouldn't know a good thing if it came up and slit your throat :heart:
:iconmorbiddisease:
Wow.... from the start to the end, you captured my interest! I agree with Katflutterby that it is emotional and beautiful. I really love this poem! :clap: :blowkiss:
:iconangel0fthenight89:
*cries* i know what you mean...my fiance and i just broke up...so yea

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August 23, 2004
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